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  1. 少用缩写: cannot, is not
  2. the painting of Jane Austen

一些习作

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The author talks about three reasons why the subject of a professionally painted portrait is Jane Austen. However, the professor puts forward several opposite arguments to contradict what is stated in the passage.

Firstly, the author is convinced that Austen's family used this painting as her portrait in an edition of her letters. On the contrary, the professor maintains that her family gave this permission when Jane had been dead for 70 years. So none of the family members had ever seen Jane and known for certain if the subject of this portrait was Austen.

Secondly, what is stated in the reading is that the face in the portrait looks similar to the one in the painting made by Austen's sister. However, the professor believes that Austen's family was quite large. There might be many sisters or cousins looking like Jane Austen. Therefore, it was reasonable that the subject of this portrait was one of these girls.

What's more, the professor also casts doubt on the point claimed in the passage that the style of this portrait matches to a painter who was hired by Austen family when Jane was an adolescent. The professor points out that other evidence also links this painting to a later date. For instance, the blank canvas used by this painting had not been sold in London until Jane was 27 years old.

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Both the lecture and the passage discuss a painting believed to be a portrait of Jane Austen. However, the ideas presented in the lecture and passage are at polar opposites. The reading asserts that Jane is the subject of the painting, while the lecture casts doubt on the reading by the following reasons.

To begin with, the professor is skeptical about the idea in the reading passage that Austen's family claimed that the subject was Jane. Instead, he points out that the picture was authorized in 1882, 70 years after Jane's death. In other words, none of the Austen's family members had seen Jane before. Thus, they did not know for certain that the girl in the picture was Jane. In addition, despite the statement in the reading that the portrait enjoys high resemblance to Cassandra's sketch of Jane, the professor contends that the subject in the painting may be a relative of Jane. Since the Austen family was large, it was possible that many Austen girls at teens resembled her. Experts suppose that the subject of the portrait is Jane's distant niece. Moreover, the writer believes that the painting was painted when Jane was in her teens, whereas the speaker views the evidence in a completely different angle. He suggests that the painting was painted later, because the canvas of the portrait was sold by William, who started selling canvas in London when Jane was 27. At that time, Jane was older than the girl in the portrait.

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Moreover, the writer believes that the painting was painted when Jane was in her teens, whereas the speaker views the evidence in a completely different angle. He suggests that the painting was painted later, because the canvas of the portrait was sold by William, who started selling canvas in London when Jane was 27. At that time, Jane was older than the girl in the portrait.

学术写作

题型

  1. 二选一
  2. open question

方法

  1. scan the class

  3. 如果二选一：要仔细看一下别人写的内容，包括观点和support

  4. 如果open question:

写法： - 一边倒：You might agree with Kelly that environmental protections should be the priority. You will need to add your own support for this viewpoint. For example, you could argue that environmental protections are a more important investment to sustain our economies. You could point out that governments currently spend a great deal of money compensating for climate change catastrophes such as increased flooding, wind damage, or ruined crops. Investing more in environmental protections now could actually save governments money later on—which could then be used for more education funding. This would differ from the support Kelly gave for her opinion. - 让步写法： - 择中写法：

sociology

?most significant 1.not moving around exercising 2.broaden thier experience

In my opinion, the most significant effect that watching TV has on people is eliminating the information gap between different parts of the world. Through Television, News and knowledge become accessible widely and instantly, helping people to catch up with the world anywhere at any time. This accessibility fosters a sense of global community and awareness, as individuals can witness events as they unfold, from natural disasters to political upheavals, and cultural phenomena. Therefore, instant responses will be made under the look of TV viewers, which deeply changes the ways of development in the world.

解析： open question

well developed: 136-160 词

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尽量完成综合写作的五篇

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