Test 1
约 1520 个字 预计阅读时间 5 分钟
- climate: 要说明favourable的是...变成了...
- Now about the second solution, relocating Torreya far from where it currently grows, well, let’s look at what happened when humans helped another tree, the black locust tree, move north to a new environment. When they did this, the black locust tree spread so quickly that it killed off many plants and trees in the new environment, and some of these plants and trees were themselves already in danger of becoming extinct. So assisted migration can have unpredicted outcomes for the new environment. 注意不是Torreya一定会出现这样的问题
- Research Center不够大，需要种子的量很多
有生命的's, 无生命的of Tom's leg, the leg of people
Brain Storming
思考： 由小到大 社会、经济、文化、教育
- individual – community – society
- Social – economic – cultural
- Social development – science & technology
- Physical – psychological/ mental/ spiritual
- Public – personal/household
- Career – family – personal fulfillment
- Colleagues – friends – family members
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
人和物 个人本身 人和团体 人和社会
- 知识、news、兴趣爱好、娱乐生活 拆分 internet people: student: knowledge -> wiki pedia adult: profession：求职 老人：health knowledge information
teachers 学业上 knowledge 心理上 -> 人生规划上 skill 价值观上 moral 即教育的三个方面
展开充分，既要有explanation, 又要有detail
重述语义：同义词
A corporation has proclaimed that it wants to set up/estabilsh a big plant adjacent to the living areas. Talk about the pros and cons of the effect on your residence zone. Are you in favor of the plant or not? Express your position.
- Specifically,
充分展开
例证法
well-known examples
无论用什么例子都要介绍一下Ta是谁（用插入法，a friend of my father, the leader of China..., a thirty year old college teacher）
Sure, here is the extracted text from the image:
In my opinion, universities are decisive in expanding one’s knowledge. Explanation: (但是不是很detail) There is no denying that one could gain knowledge from both the textbooks and teachers, which will inevitably lead to his/her personal accomplishment.
Take Isaac Newton for an example, who is widely accepted as one of the most influential physicists and mathematicians worldwide. (介绍) Through his tertiary education in Physics at Cambridge, Newton read a large number of books written by famous scientists, including Copernicus and Galileo, and frequently conversed with his teacher, Barrow, for a more comprehensive understanding of classical mechanics. As a result, he succeeded in formulating the law of gravitation that has dominated the physics world for centuries.（personal accomplishment）
具象的，最好有细节（Detail）
并列的例子： 有逻辑的：progress - sacrifice I think every progress has its cost as there is no free lunch in the world. For instance, a student’s progress on mathematics is probably gained by paying less attention to other subjects, and a career-oriented young man could have sacrificed most of his leisure time or even health to compete for promotion and pay rise. For some countries or regions, they might have long been using their fresh air and clean water to exchange for a speedy economic development. In this case, the long lasting pollution and its chain harm to both nature and society have become the expensive and detrimental costs tightly associated with the economic progress that has been achieved.
I think participating in community activities is a practical and effective approach for teenagers to enhance their social skills. For instance, participance in volunteering work can not only provide them with chances to interact with diverse groups of people, but also . Additionally, joining in clean-up activities in community will rich their experience in cooperating with others. These experiences help teenagers to shape their characteristics and responsibililty as.
如果事情是较为笼统的，那么最好是具体的人：a friend of mine 如果人是笼统的 - teenager, 那么事情最好是具体的：host an English conversation group
In my opinion, the intensifying pressure to compete among children to go to a better school increases juvenile delinquency. In such a fiercely competitive society, children are under enormous pressure from many aspects, among which the competition for better schools is one of the most intense. Children who fail in the entrance examination are deprived of the opportunities to receive a better and higher education. Accordingly, without an impressive educational background, it is difficult for them to find a proper job. As a result, they become full of resentment at a society, doing harm to strangers and disrupting social order, both of which vitally increase juvenile delinquency
Teenagers tend to overuse their cell phones, which creates many problems. There're so many information and resources of mixed quality on the Internet, some of which will lead to addiction for teenagers today.
Comparison and Contrast
I agree that the Internet has brought great convenience for individuals to get access to large amounts of information. It becomes extremely convenient for travelers, for example, to search information about local cuisine by logging on the Internet when they first visit a city. Local residents can also be greatly benefited from the Internet by knowing the closest community center and hospitals. By contrast, all the convenience were impossible before the Internet first came into our daily life. Travelers had to carry with them a load of travel information and local residents had to ask other people for the information. Without the Internet, it will be much troublesome for people to obtain the information they need.
remarkably changed in recent years
These days, workers get paid during high temperature worktime, as well as receiving enormous ；福利；
change 不一定是improve 或者 decline
I agree that the Internet has brought great convenience for individuals to get access to large amounts of information. It becomes extremely convenient for travelers, for example, to search information about local cuisine by logging on the Internet when they first visit a city. Local residents can also be greatly benefited from the Internet by knowing the closest community center and hospitals. By contrast, all the convenience were impossible before the Internet first came into our daily life. Travelers had to carry with them a load of travel and information local residents had to ask other people for the information. Without the Internet, it will be much troublesome for people to obtain the information they need.
Argumentation
数字式、引用式、具体的事情/事物式的
In my opinion cities include a vast number of academic and cultural facilities. A child who visits such places on a regular basis will undoubtedly become very interested in some of them. In addition, they will be able to make well-informed decisions about their future. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was young I lived in a major urban area, so my parents could easily take me to a cultural event almost every weekend. We attended book readings at the local library, art openings at many of the galleries throughout the city, and literary festivals during the summer. As a result of attending these outings I developed a strong interest in artistic expression, and decided to major in music at university. Now I enjoy a successful career as a recording artist. For this reason, I strongly believe that it is worthwhile to grow up in a large city.
- 阐述背景
- 先阐述自己的观点，用例证法
- 提到同学的观点，赞成/反对
例如： The topic of globalization has generated much discussion in recent years. My personal belief is that when nations interact together it leads to less suffering. For example, people who suffer from natural catastrophes can import goods and services to help mitigate (reduce/alleviate) their losses and recover quickly. Citizens of nations who may be going through war or famine can flee to neighbouring countries for shelter. I understand Alex’s concern over cultural homogenization, but I believe she misses another critical point. Much of the food found in grocery stores around the world is imported. Our very diet is due to the international trade partnerships and alliances forged over the last half of the 20th century. International trade and travel are not possible in a world without globalization, which is why I believe it is crucial to maintain our current global policies for a safer world with a higher standard of living.
也可以I totally agree with xxx point about xxx and I would like to add